Outside/Inside
Outside
Warm
Sunny
Happy
The sun is shining
The sky is blue
The air smells fresh
Inside
Cold
Dark
Dreary
The lights are off
The walls are gray
The air smells damp
Inside
The lights are on
The walls are blue
The air smells fresh
Warm
Sunny
Happy
Outside
The sun is hiding
The sky is gray
The air smells damp
Cold
Dark
Dreary
Spring
Renewal
Rebirth
Shake off the sorrow
Welcome the smiles
A time to start over
A time to forget
Until winter comes again
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A good contrast there between the two "sides" of inside/outside. Have you thought about submitting any of these poems anywhere?
ReplyDeleteI have, but have yet to act on it. I would really like some more feedback on all of my writing that is posted here, and not just positive comments.
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